"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart." ~William Wordsworth...
Jasmine,I have enjoyed reading your posts. Your last 3 words say it all about friends--love, care, fun. Congratulations on completing your slices. Continue your writing even though no one is watching. This is my goal now, too.
It's great how you summarized your feelings about friends at the end: love, care, fun. But the rest of the poem told more specific details, which is good. Lovely poem-did you show your friends?
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