Guest Student Slicer - Jasmine

Friends are great people.
They are loyal and fun.
They are always there for you
when you need them the most.  
You can call them any time
and ask any question.
Love  Care  Fun.

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  1. TamMarch 31, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Jasmine,I have enjoyed reading your posts. Your last 3 words say it all about friends--love, care, fun. Congratulations on completing your slices. Continue your writing even though no one is watching. This is my goal now, too.

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  2. Linda BMarch 31, 2011 at 8:23 PM

    It's great how you summarized your feelings about friends at the end: love, care, fun. But the rest of the poem told more specific details, which is good. Lovely poem-did you show your friends?

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